Here’s another excerpt from my WIP. In this one Ryan, who’s riding in the car with Cammy, is a little edgy and she quickly notices. Thanks for the previous comments and hope you enjoy this one.
“Whatsa matter?” she glimpsed at him.
Ryan didn’t want to risk agitating her by mentioning how this situation made him uneasy. “I was…just thinkin’…you know,”
“Spit it out!” she blurted.
“You think your boyfriend might be mad, if he knew I was sittin’ here?” he asked, stunned at himself for making such an impetuous assumption.
“Don’t have one,” she snickered.
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