Another Sunday is here. First, I want to thank those for the critiquing on my last six. It helped a great deal, though I felt guilty for not catching that the first time I wrote it. Anyways, this week we continue from my last six, where Cammy hasn’t answered Ryan’s question about her dad, so he pushes for an answer. Hope you like it and hope you’re all having a good summer! Here it is:
“Yo, Earth to Cammy,” Ryan said, raising his voice and poking at her arm. “What?” she finally looked at him with her droopy eyes.
“You didn’t answer me…is your dad, you know, uh-”
“No, he’s livin’, last time I checked, he and I got some…issues.”
“OK, you coulda told me that.”
Cammy shrugged and went back to staring at the twig-littered ground.
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