Good day, it’s Six Sunday, the place to read snippets from some of the best writers out there. This week we continue from my novel in progress entitled Let Go. I’ve noticed that many of you like Cammy, while others have wondered why Ryan doesn’t walk out on her. So this week, I thought I would share a six from the same chapter where Cammy still won’t give Ryan his watch back, but somehow Ryan just can’t get the nerve to walk out on her. This six is all narration, which I feel I’m a bit weak at, so your input will be really appreciated. Enjoy!
Ryan threw his hands up in self-defeat like a coach watching his team being pummeled. He was certain that he would be late for work, but did not want to make a scene in place with too many witnesses. The voices upstairs kept prompting him to get up, snatch the watch and bolt, especially since he had his own ride back to campus. Something indescribable about her made it impossible for him to get out of his seat. Aside from her pretty face, he had been enticed by her sharp, touchy gab and soft voice that almost sung to him like a favorite song. He didn’t want to follow his own father’s example by walking out on a girl, even if she had been rude to him.