Six Sunday 11/18/12

Welcome to another week of Six Sunday. This week we finish the scene between Cammy and Ryan playing ‘keep-away’. Here, having been unable to convince Ryan to drop her shoes, she leaps onto the cool, sidewalk.  The six starts after Ryan tells her to give him the watch, and Cammy ponders simply running to her car. Who will give in first?
Here it is, hope you all like:

Still grimacing from the pain, Cammy looked over in the direction where her Beetle was parked – a distance of fifty yards. She knew it would be impossible to run for it without burning her feet even more.

“Alright stud, you win,” she tossed him the watch, which he instantly caught with his free hand.

“Gimmie my damn slippers!”

“What’s your hurry?” he quipped.

“Ryan, quit playin’ around, give ‘em now!

Ryan immediately tosses them over to her, since he feels she’s suffered enough. I don’t want to show this because I feel the details are not important. Next week, I’ll show snippets from the next chapter.

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20 thoughts on “Six Sunday 11/18/12

  1. Jessica Subject

    Love how he turned it around on her. Great six! 🙂

  2. These two are great characters aren’t they!

  3. Cammy and Ryan need a truce. I hope they can get beyond this.

    • They do make a truce after, but Cammy knows he’s being a goof. Unfortunately, I won’t sharing it since there are other snippets I want to share.

  4. Fun 6, Frank, turn about’s fair play, and all

  5. It’s all fun and games until someone has burned feet. lol. Cute six!

  6. I gather the sidewalk is in the shade. I feel her pain, but she deserves it.

    • yes the sidewalk is in the shade. And yes, she does deserve it, since he refused to give the watch back in the first place.

  7. I like these two! I’m glad they’ve given in and returned their things. 🙂

    • Thanks, and yes it’s nice they get their things back, although Cammy should have given the watch back the easy way, but that’s her character.

  8. He’ a LOT nicer than she is. 🙂 Nicely written too.

  9. Another nice six. I enjoy your writing.

  10. siobhanmuir

    I like her weighing the virtues of taking the watch and burning her feet. Good six, Frank. 🙂

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