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Weekend Writing Warriors – Get Outta Bed!

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This is the weekly 8-10 sentence blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. Click on the link to visit other participating writers. Thanks for visiting my blog! I’m glad I can be sharing in the Sunday Snippet magic. I hope spring has arrived early in your parts.
I’m continuing from my YA WIP, Love Conquers. Full blurb can be found by clicking the Love Conquers page on my blog.
This snippet takes place in a flashback where heroine, Melissa, recalls the day after her boyfriend dumped her. Melissa’s sister, Ashley wants her to get out of bed and threatens to tickle her if she doesn’t. POV is Melissa’s. Ashley is the first to speak. Creative punctuation has been used to meet the sentence limit rule.

“Okay, I wantcha to, like, pick something you and I can do cuz I’m all yours for the rest of the day. Seriously, anything you want, money’s no object. Buuut, it can be lying in bed or binge-watching Netflix on the couch, so get your ass outta bed and make a choice!”

“And if I refuse?”

“I’ll tickle your feet for hours and hours.”

My eyes bulge as I gasp sit up and scoot my feet away from her. “Noooo, not that, okay you win!”

Ashley lips frame a playful evil grin as she wiggles her fingers. I hate having my feet tickled, and I know she’ll tickle mine until I literally pass out, so I’ve got no choice but to give in. I don’t even know how I let Chris tickle me every time we chilled at each other’s homes.

 

 

That should get Melissa out of bed! This is the last snippet I will share from this scene. On to a different one the next time I participate. Comments are most welcome and appreciated!

Well, my trip to Budapest and Zagreb was great! Another two countries crossed off my travel bucket list! Another six weeks and my teaching for the year will be officially over. I’ve enjoyed the experience being abroad but I’m looking forward to returning home to see family and friends.

Happy Sunday!

Frank

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Weekend Writing Warriors – You Have Me!

 

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This is the weekly 8-10 sentence blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. Thanks for visiting my blog! I’m glad I can be sharing in the Sunday Snippet magic. I hope spring has arrived early in your parts.
I’m continuing from my YA WIP, Love Conquers. Full blurb can be found by clicking the Love Conquers page on my blog.
This snippet takes place in a flashback where heroine, Melissa, recalls the day after her boyfriend dumped her. She has been in bed all day and is grief-stricken and her sister tries to cheer her up. This snippet continues from last week where Ashley suggests going to a yoga class. Melissa prefers walking barefoot over fiery hot coals. Let’s see what Ashley has to say about that. Creative punctuation has been used to meet the 10-sentence limit.

          “And, like, severely burn the bottoms of your feet and be in a wheelchair for the rest of your life?”
          I grunt and turn away from her.
          “Mel, you can’t, like, stay in bed forever.”
          “I gave him everything, my heart, my soul. I lost the only guy who ever loved me, I, like, have nobody now.”
           Ashley cups my chin, turning my head so that I’m looking at her, gazing at me with eyes full of sadness and concern. “That’s so not true, you, like, got your friends, Dad, and most importantly, you have me. I might, like, annoy the shit outta you sometimes, but you’ll always have me. And FYI, he lost you.”
         She kisses my forehead, and I collapse in her t-shirt, pooling it with a fresh batch of tears.

As much of a P.I.T.A. Ashley can be, she really is an awesome sister. I think she’s got a point about walking over hot coals, too! Your thoughts and feedback are most welcome and appreciated!

Happy Easter to all as well! I’ll be absent next weekend as I’m travelling to Budapest and Zagreb for my Easter holiday break!

Until next time!

Frank

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Weekend Writing Warriors – The Good Sister

 

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This is the weekly 8-10 sentence blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. Thanks for visiting my blog! I’m glad I can be sharing in the Sunday Snippet magic. I hope spring has arrived early in your parts. It’s come early here in Poland!
I’m sharing a snippet from my YA WIP, Love Conquers. Full blurb can be found by clicking the Love Conquers page on my blog.
This snippet takes place in a flashback where heroine, Melissa, recalls the day after her boyfriend dumped her. She has been in bed all day and is grief-stricken. In this scene, her sister, Ashley, tries to boost her spirits by inviting her to a yoga class. But yoga isn’t Melissa’s thing. Creative editing has been used to meet the sentence limit:

 

          Ashley scoots beside me on my bed, stretches her legs out and crosses her ankles. She wraps an arm around my shoulder and rests my head on her chest. My eyes instantly well up with tears. I’m glad she’s being an awesome sister but at the same time I just don’t want her to see me like this.
          “I’m goin’ to yoga class in an hour, wanna come? My studio, like, charges sixteen bucks to drop in, but I’ll cover ya.”
           She knows perfectly well that I hate yoga. I tried it once with Chris and quickly realized I’m not flexible enough to do all those weird poses. I was amazed I didn’t barf after being in a room for an hour full of people wearing too much cologne or perfume, not to mention stinky feet.
           “I’d rather walk barefoot over a bed of red-hot coals,” I groan.

Walk over hot coals? That’s a bit extreme, don’t you think, Melissa? Looks like Ashley is going to have to suggest something better to get her sister out of bed.

Your thoughts are much appreciated. Thanks again for visiting, and be sure to visit other participating authors’ blogs.

I’m up in Warsaw for the day, so it will take me awhile to respond to your comments.

Frank

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