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Weekend Writing Warriors/#8Sunday – Attack a Man’s Heart


Good morning and welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors. Click on the link for the list of today’s participating authors. Who knows? Maybe you’ll end up joining the fun! More from The Burning Night this week. I’m skipping a little further from last week’s eight.

Set-up: We learned last week that Melissa and Ashley are being held prisoners by a family of women – Emily and her daughters, Sandra and Ally. Emily has just explained that Melissa and Ashley’s father expelled her daughters from high school, and now she wants to repay the favor. Ashley doesn’t see the point of being imprisoned and she lets them know.

The eight (with some creative punctuation):


Ashley rolled her eyes, snorted and boomed, “You cows are, like, so pathetic…if our dad did anything to you, then go to him instead of keepin’ us prisoners!”

Typical Ashley, always mouthing off at people bigger, even tougher than her. Sometimes her big mouth got her in hot lava at school, and then I’d have to bail her out. The faces on all three of the women tightened, and looked as if they wanted to strangle Ashley – thank God for that glass. I winced as Emily glared at my sister with fiery eyes.

“Oh my tenacious teenager, so much you don’t understand! It’s better to attack a man’s heart – the ones he cares about the most…like his two daughters.”

An uncomfortable feeling suddenly seared in my stomach.


Melissa isn’t taking Emily lightly. She knows she and Ashley are in deep trouble. I think Ashley will soon say, “Me and my big mouth!”

I know many of you want to know more about the history between Emily and Melissa’s father, but that would give away too much. As this isn’t published, I can only give away so much meat. You’ll just have to wait until this comes out.

More from this next week. Well, what do you think?

Have fun today everyone and thanks for visiting my site!

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Six Sunday – 11/11/12

Welcome to another week of Six Sunday. Hard to believe we’re almost halfway through November! This week, we continue from the last line of last week’s post. For those who don’t particularly like Cammy, I guess you feel it serves her right. For those of you who missed the last posting, click on Six Sunday 11/4/12.

One note: I’ve been getting comments wondering where my story is going. One thing I want to say now is there is more to my novel than what I have been sharing on Six Sunday. There are many subplots to the story that requires one to read the whole book.  In other words, there’s more to Ryan than just Cammy. Unfortunately since my book is not finished, I cannot share anything crucial from my story, for fear that someone may take the idea. I hope this helps and that you continue to read my sixes. So here’s the six:

“Kay stud! Oww! Need my slippers now!”

Watching her endure a hot foot, Ryan folded his arms across his chest and laughed. It was sweet revenge for her selfish attitude and he wouldn’t even sympathize her repeated cries. Desperate for him to drop her flip-flops, she stared at him with a darting gaze as she continued to ‘dance’. With a smirk of his own, he held up her shoes.

 “Gimmie the watch first.”

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